this pretty clean, if it had a small bit more variation at parts, like splash it up a lil, it would've been damn near flawless, sample on the voice during the breaks was a little much as well, keep at it frfr
this pretty clean, if it had a small bit more variation at parts, like splash it up a lil, it would've been damn near flawless, sample on the voice during the breaks was a little much as well, keep at it frfr
Thx!
the mix needs an overhaul, i don't like how random notes spike in volume suddenly. overall melody is not bad, i'd say it needs a little more in the way of composition to really make this a PIECE piece
Thanks for the feedback!
the mix is not very good, the beat is pretty bad, back to the drawing board with that. and you simply don't rap with enough sauce for the contents of the lyrics
Honestly, that was kind of the point. Friend and I were bored and threw this together in like 45 minutes.
very easy listening, keep at it
it's at least coherent. Mix needs work and if you gon freestyle, at least deliver that joint better.
it's chill but it needs to evolve
the composition is pretty solid, the one thing I'd change if any, the fill claps that spike up in volume, caught me off guard, just knock that audio down, lower the velocity on a couple of those notes. Solid work otherwise, keep it up
yeeeeeeeeeee, this SLAPSSSS!
veeeery nice to have on in the background!
Thanks!
pretty decent dubstep track, can use cleaning up, but not bad
thx for feedback
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